So this email I received on Tuesday. Remember I didn't even really read the first email from Part I. The first line of this email caught my attention (not in a good way) and made me go back to see if I had any other communication from this "salesperson".
You can read Part I - here
Unfortunately, our schedules didn't match
yesterday, and we were unable to speak.
Ok, this did catch my attention, but more because I am truly tired of the "pitch" emails that try to bait you with out and out untruths and misinformation. There was a tiny part of my brain that said, "what did I miss this time?" Covid brain fog is a real thing. No greeting on the email. At least it didn't start with To Whom It May Concern.
Have you considered my previous email about the potential match to our BETA program and it's potential benefits to your business?
I'm an Associate Producer with COMPANY NAME, and because of your business's reputation, I have reserved a spot in our BETA program that has all the production costs underwritten.
As mentioned yesterday, out of the top 14 businesses in Minneapolis, because of the reviews you have online you made the list as one of our 1st choices.
Have you considered my previous email about the potential match to our BETA program and it's potential benefits to your business?
I'm an Associate Producer with COMPANY NAME, and because of your business's reputation, I have reserved a spot in our BETA program that has all the production costs underwritten.
As mentioned yesterday, out of the top 14 businesses in Minneapolis, because of the reviews you have online you made the list as one of our 1st choices.
Top 14 businesses in Minneapolis? Our small, family run, boutique trade show exhibit and marketing company is one of the top 14 businesses in Minneapolis? I better start using that in my marketing materials. Oh, and remember, those on-line reviews he mentioned? He was supposed to cut and paste something into his first email.
Again, we are underwriting all the costs of production so reply back if you are interested in discussing the availability before I am potentially forced to give it to one of your competitors to meet my deadlines.
I'll be expecting your reply. My number is xxx-xxx-xxxx.
Again, we are underwriting all the costs of production so reply back if you are interested in discussing the availability before I am potentially forced to give it to one of your competitors to meet my deadlines.
I'll be expecting your reply. My number is xxx-xxx-xxxx.
Maybe I should actually give you all his phone number you so can book your session. But the language here? "I'll be expecting your reply." Wow. This guy has never bothered to pick up the phone to introduce himself to us, he doesn't even know my name. Remember? 'To Whom It May Concern'.
P.S. It's pretty likely when we add the syndication to the video you will obtain a lot of exposure online. We've had several beta testers experience getting customers after seeing the commercial, and when asked how they found the company they said they had seen the online commercial.
I checked out their YouTube channel. There were NOT several videos out there.
Another 5 Star Review from a satisfied BETA participant "Salesperson called and discussed the idea of the video, there was no pressure applied he just shared with me the idea they have for getting my company a better listing on Google. The product that is produced makes this a no brainier. When they say it is easy and painless they are not joking. All I had to do was take a photo and all the rest was taken care of. I highly recommend speaking to Salesperson. - Rick
Ok, a little more substance to this review, but still not something that is going to make me pick up the phone to make sure I meet his expectations of a reply.
Another 5 Star Review from a satisfied BETA participant "Salesperson called and discussed the idea of the video, there was no pressure applied he just shared with me the idea they have for getting my company a better listing on Google. The product that is produced makes this a no brainier. When they say it is easy and painless they are not joking. All I had to do was take a photo and all the rest was taken care of. I highly recommend speaking to Salesperson. - Rick
Ok, a little more substance to this review, but still not something that is going to make me pick up the phone to make sure I meet his expectations of a reply.
So, my advice to this salesperson?
- Don't start your email with some statement that really isn't true. You have turned off your reader before they even finish the first statement.
- Selling to me is your job, not mine. Try something like, "I'll call you tomorrow to tell you more about this amazing offer."
- Sales is WORK. You cannot think that you can send out an automated email campaign and just wait for the orders to start coming in. You will ultimately fail.
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Lori Hanken has been in sales and marketing for over 30 years. She is passionate about service and providing value to her vendors, prospects and clients. Lori is currently co-owner of Total Displays with her husband David. They help people look great at events, trade shows, in retail, museums and develop long partnerships with customers and suppliers. If you would like to learn more, email her at lori@totaldisplays.com. She is an open networker, connect with her on LinkedIn here.
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