So this email I received on Tuesday. Remember I didn't even really read the first email from Part I. The first line of this email caught my attention (not in a good way) and made me go back to see if I had any other communication from this "salesperson".
You can read Part I - here
~StartHave you considered my previous email about the potential match to our BETA program and it's potential benefits to your business?
I'm an Associate Producer with COMPANY NAME, and because of your business's reputation, I have reserved a spot in our BETA program that has all the production costs underwritten.
As mentioned yesterday, out of the top 14 businesses in Minneapolis, because of the reviews you have online you made the list as one of our 1st choices.
Again, we are underwriting all the costs of production so reply back if you are interested in discussing the availability before I am potentially forced to give it to one of your competitors to meet my deadlines.
I'll be expecting your reply. My number is xxx-xxx-xxxx.
P.S. It's pretty likely when we add the syndication to the video you will obtain a lot of exposure online. We've had several beta testers experience getting customers after seeing the commercial, and when asked how they found the company they said they had seen the online commercial.
Another 5 Star Review from a satisfied BETA participant "Salesperson called and discussed the idea of the video, there was no pressure applied he just shared with me the idea they have for getting my company a better listing on Google. The product that is produced makes this a no brainier. When they say it is easy and painless they are not joking. All I had to do was take a photo and all the rest was taken care of. I highly recommend speaking to Salesperson. - Rick
Ok, a little more substance to this review, but still not something that is going to make me pick up the phone to make sure I meet his expectations of a reply.
So, my advice to this salesperson?
- Don't start your email with some statement that really isn't true. You have turned off your reader before they even finish the first statement.
- Selling to me is your job, not mine. Try something like, "I'll call you tomorrow to tell you more about this amazing offer."
- Sales is WORK. You cannot think that you can send out an automated email campaign and just wait for the orders to start coming in. You will ultimately fail.
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